Last weekend, my family and I took a trip to Kenting. As soon as we got there, we went swimming at the beach. Although the weather was very hot, the seawater was cool. In the evening, we ate a lot of Taiwanese snacks at the night market. It was the happiest trip I have taken this year.
每一句的翻譯重點
Last weekend, my family and I took a trip to Kenting. 「我和家人」英文習慣把 I 放最後:my family and I;旅行用 take a trip to。
As soon as we got there, we went swimming at the beach. 「一…就…」=as soon as;go swimming 是固定說法。
Although the weather was very hot, the seawater was cool. 中文「雖然…但是…」,英文 although 和 but 只能用一個,這是最常被扣分的地方。
In the evening, we ate a lot of Taiwanese snacks at the night market. 小吃=snacks;整篇是過去的事,全部用過去式。
It was the happiest trip I have taken this year. 最高級+現在完成式:the happiest trip I have taken(我今年參加過最快樂的旅行)。