請根據以下三張圖片,寫一篇約 50 字的短文,描述圖中發生的事。 Look at the three pictures. Write a story of about 50 words.
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One rainy afternoon, Tony was walking home from school. He saw a small dog sitting alone on the street, and it was very wet. Tony took the dog home, and he dried it with a towel. His mother smiled and helped him. The next day, a girl came to their house. It was her dog! She was very happy to see her dog again, and she thanked Tony.
範文為什麼拿高分:逐句解析
One rainy afternoon, Tony was walking home from school. 交代時間、人物、地點,開頭清楚。
He saw a small dog sitting alone on the street, and it was very wet. 描述圖一,用 saw…sitting 描寫看到的狀態。
Tony took the dog home, and he dried it with a towel. 圖二:用過去式連接兩個動作。
His mother smiled and helped him. 加入圖中其他人物,內容更完整。
The next day, a girl came to their house. It was her dog! 圖三:用 The next day 表示時間轉換。
She was very happy to see her dog again, and she thanked Tony. 給故事一個結尾,評分會看是否完整描述三張圖。